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Tuesday 18 December 2012

Fine's Peer Assessment on Taryn's Writing


Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist
Read over your partner’s work and judge their writing using the following criteria.

Narrative Criteria***
My partner has written an orientation*
My partner describes where the story takes place*
My partner has described when the story takes place*
My partner describes how the story begins*
My partner introduces characters*
My partner defines the characters’ personalities*

My partner describes what the characters look like*
My partner has created a problem that the characters experience*
My partner includes a resolution - how the problem / situation was solved *
My partner has written a final concluding statement*
My partner uses a variety of language features, e.g. active verbs, conjunctions, similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification*


Peer Assessment Surface Features Checklist


Surface Features Criteria***
My partner writes in full sentences*
My partner sequences his/her ideas clearly*
My partner uses complex sentences*
My partner varies sentence beginnings*
My partner uses conjunctions e.g. “and” correctly*
My partner uses capital letters correctly throughout writing*
My partner uses full stops correctly throughout writing*
My partner spells all words correctly*
My partner proof reads his / her writing*
My partner edits his/her writing-by making changes to the vocabulary e.g. said - yelled, asked, etc. *
My partner writes in paragraphs*

Today I did a checklist. As you can see Taryn's has to do nothing at all she has done all that she was needed to do. Taryn has done excellent work and I think that her story was perfect.

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