My maths whizz results.

My wall wisher based on ANZAC. By Fine

 This is A wallwisher based on ANZAC day.

My comment to Isabella.

My Poster on Diwali. By Fine

This is my poster. I worked on it with my partner/classmate Caitlin. We did this poster based on Diwali. We have been gathering information about Diwali and using applications to show off our information. This application is called Comic life.

My comment to TCTV

My results from Diwali

My results from Sumdog

My presentation on Diwali

This is my presentation based on Diwali ME and my partner Caitlin has worked really hard on our presentation. SO please leave comments.

My Rubric.

My maths whizz

This is my what maths whizz looks like. As you can see I am coming 5th out of my buddies.

My popplet on Fredrich Vordemberge Gildewart

My Self Assessment - Narrative Checklist. By Fine

Narrative Checklist

Narrative Criteria	**	**	**
I can write an orientation	**
I can describe where the story takes place	**
I can describe when the story takes place	**
I can describe how the story begins	**
I can introduce my characters	**
I can define my characters’ personalities	**
I can describe what my characters look like		**
I can create a problem that my characters experience	**
I can include a resolution - how the problem / situation was solved	**
I can write a final concluding statement	**
I can use a variety of language features, e.g. active verbs, conjunctions, similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification			**

Surface Features Checklist

Surface Features Criteria	*	*	*
I can write in full sentences	*
I can sequence my ideas clearly	*
I can use complex sentences	*
I can vary sentence beginnings	*
I can use conjunctions e.g. “and” correctly	*
I can use capital letters correctly	*
I can use full stops correctly	*
I can spell all my words correctly	*
I can proof read my writing		*
I can edit my writing-by making changes to the vocabulary e.g. said - yelled, asked, etc.	*
I can write in paragraphs	*

This is my Self Assessment - Narrative Checklist. I have to really improve on using similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification. I have to try to improve on proof reading my work and describe what the characters look like. Please leave comments or give me good luck on improving these things.

My comment to Isabella

My comment to Angel

My comment to Liantres wonderful Narrative

My Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist