This is my scratch project. This animation displays students learning about how to be healthy from an athlete. If you can't see the animation on here, click on the link above, to experience it! Please comment on some of the aspects that you like about this digital story. Also comment on any changes that you would recommend that I make to this digital story.
13 comments:
Hi FIne
I really like your healthy living animation and it looks really easy. It looks like you are having fun and I like the way it is easy and it makes sense!:)
Yours SIncerely,
Linda
Hi Fine
Your story is good, but there is grammar mistakes. Also make the characters move, instead of teleporting. It will also help if you make your story more interactive.
Mengchun
Hi Fine,
This is a really amazing scratch project. This teaches us about to eat healthy and stay healthy. Keep it up!!!!!!!
Fantastic
Intelligent
Nice
Excellent
By Tim
Hi Fine
I really like you characters and how your story talks about heathy living. Keep up the good work
Hi Fine,
You have a really great scratch it is a great piece of work it looks like you put a lot of effort in your work,
From,
Oh s'mar
Hi Menchun, Shaylah, Tim, and Linda,
I really appreciate your useful feedback! I can't move the characters because they will stay in the same motion when in another backdrop. Thanks for all the positive feedback! I really do appreciate it!
Yours Sincerely,
Fine
Hey Fine
I really like how to you teach other people how to keep fit and healthy.
Keep Up The Good Word..
Hi Fine, I really like your scratch. I think you listened really well to the instructions. Nice Work :)
Hey Fine,
I really love your scratch project It's amazing. It looked like you had a lot of fun doing it but there would have been a lot of commands in there aswell.
Keep up the amazing work Fine!
Hey Fine,
your digital story was great.
I like how they talked about healthy living.
My favourite part was when they visited the
famous athlete.
Hi Jhardae, Shantay, and Patrick,
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
Hi Fine,
I like how you've included a group of people. It's more effective. There are some spelling errors. Please fix it. Besides the spelling errors, amazing work. Keep it up!
Hi Yvette,
Thanks for the feedback! I've looked back and have changed them!
Yours Sincerely,
Fine
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