Friday, 1 March 2013
Little Red Riding Hood
Little Red Riding Hood. Once upon a time there lived a girl called Little Red Riding Hood. She was named Little Red Riding Hood because her lovely grandmother knitted her a nice red cloak with a hood on top when she was born and Little Red Riding Hood never took it off. She had beautiful long brown hair and dreamy blue eyes from her mother. Little Red Riding hood lived in cottage with her mother Crystal in a lovely place called Bunny Woods. Crystal heard that her mother was sick she and said to Little Red Riding Hood “Little Red RIding Hood it seems that granny has caught the cold, could you please give her these custard tarts?” “ Sure mum” she replied. “ But child you CAN NOT talk to strangers, okay Little Red Riding Hood?”. “ Yes mother” she replied. As she walked to granny’s cottage she came past a wolf. The wolf looked like a dog hunting for food, he was silent and Little Red Riding Hood saw his beady eyes and his black fur. He saw Little Red Riding Hood and quickly came to her side. He looked friendly and he asked Little Red Riding Hood “ Where are you on your way to, little girl?” “My Granny’s cottage, she is very ill and I’m giving her these homemade custard tarts for tea” she replied to him. “ Oh, well I can tell granny that you’re on your way to her” “ Thanks that would be very sincere”. The Wolf went to Granny’s cottage and knocked on the door. “ Who is it?” asked Granny. “ It is me Little Red Riding Hood, I have come here to have tea with you since you’re very ill Granny” “ The latch is on the door sweetie”. The Wolf opened the door and sprang into her room and swallowed her whole. The Wolf was almost full but saved the best for last. He disguised himself as granny and pulled the covers up to his neck and shut the curtains closed so she couldn’t see him. When she finally had got to granny’s cottage she knocked on the door “ Who is it?” “ It is me Little Red Riding Hood, I have come here to have tea with you since you’re very ill Granny”. “ The latch is on the door sweetie”. “Leave the stuff on the table and come to cuddle in with me”. “Granny what big ears you have” said Little Red Riding Hood. “More the better to hear you with my child”. “ Oh and what awful big eyes you have”. “ More the better to see you with darling”. “Granny and what big teeth you have”. “ More the better TO EAT YOU WITH”. He sprang out of the bed and swallowed her whole too. The wolf was very full and tired so he lay down on granny’s bed. Unfortunately the wolf was a loud snorer. When a wood cutter came past he heard the wolf snoring and went inside. He said “ I've been tracking you down for years. While he was asleep the woodcutter cut up his stomach and out popped Little Red Riding Hood and Granny. Then Little Red Riding Hood really learnt not to talk to strangers especially wolves. But then it was Granny’s birthday and well thats another.
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5 comments:
Hi Fine,
I really enjoyed reading your story on Little Red Riding Hood. I liked how you described the characters like Little Red Riding Hood and the wolf. I also liked how you used speech marks when the characters are talking. Keep up the great story telling Fine.
From,
Angel
Hi Fine,
I liked how introduce the characters and how you wrote your story. I liked how you have use speech marks, full stops and Capital letters. You have done a very good work on your narrative. Keep your work up,
From Oh s'mar
Hi Fine,
Your Little Red Riding Hood story is Exquisite and I love the picture and how you described About Little Red Riding Hood mostly her eyes. And when you written down Little Red Riding Hood lived in cottage remember to put an a in it next time because it doesn't make much sense.
Keep up the good work and remember what I typed down.
From,
Ducati
Hi Fine
I really like your story about little red riding hood it was so long but great i hope you like what i said to you keep up the good work
Thanks Tiare for the feedback.
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